Monday, April 18, 2011

Bristols At Dawn

I want to feel dark
With a cloud or two overhung
No little whispers
Of spring
Sprang
Sprung
I want to feel dark
When the lights are still on.

I want the thunder in my head
Crashing around my mind
No little peaks
Of sun
Shown
Shine
I want the thunder in my head
While it's raining inside.

4 comments:

Pranavam Ravikumar a.k.a. Kochuravi said...

Nice one!

Rekha said...

I can empathise...I have felt it often....incredible lines.

i.Mo said...

nice poem
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http://incredible-mo.blogspot.com/

Elizabeth Mueller said...

Wow, I love this poem, great feel! Thanks for commenting my blog today!
:)

Happy Friday!

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