Wednesday, September 01, 2010

Mirrors

Everyone that I fall for reminds me of you
That's why I stopped falling in love
It's just not worth it if you're not falling too

Same eyes but a different look
Same lips but a different kiss
Same fingers but a different touch

And there's a pretty girl sitting across the room
Mouthing words I could have written
Should have written
Words I just can't say
To your mirror

8 comments:

Bela said...

Wow, this is great! I love the second stanza :)


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Pat Tillett said...

And there's a pretty girl sitting across the room
Mouthing words I could have written

really nice Tim...

Have you ever written any poetry when you're mad?

TS Hendrik said...

Bela, Thank you very much.

Pat, Thanks. Always means a lot to have you comment on my poetry. Yeah, I've written some very angry stuff. Most of what I post here is just an outlet for melancholy but I've been thinking of posting some of my other poems and lyrics.

Pat Tillett said...
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Pat Tillett said...

As creative and varied as you are on your other blog, I figured you might write some other moods into your poetry also. Either way, it's good and I like it!

Anon. said...

Lovee this. You've got a new follower thats for sure.

xo

TS Hendrik said...

Anon, thank you.

Sandra said...

This is really good! And I can really relate to the first two verses, love it!